Black Poetry : you "make" me..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 29, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just touching
    you
    just strolling
    my fingers
    the entire length
    of
    all your
    strength

    memorizing

    you &
    this
    & how
    deep
    we kiss

    *****

    just feeling
    you
    just breathing
    the essence
    the oneness ~
    this 'presence'

    creates me
    anew

    yes, like
    newborn
    'new'

    whenever
    I reach
    to
    touch/feel

    you


    alyce, 2001
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QUEEN ALYCE.... (Ms A)

    ...sighing...

    (nuff said)

    ThanksForOnceAgainSharingYourBeauty...
    SunShyne~
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaahhhh...

    but to be reborn in LOVE on a regular.
    gentle is the touch of she whose love
    flows gracefully over the whole of me
    as i reach deep inside and savor quiet
    rides that reach trembling peaks of
    pleasurable moments in the early morning
    dew. for now, i give thanks to you.


    saying so much with so little, Ms A.

    keep it tyght.:)

    peace
     
  4. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce

    wish somebody WOULD wanna touch/feel me this way!

    mojo
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    UMMMMM!! ALYCE

    THE WAY U SMACK THOSE LIPS
    AND BRING OUT THE BEST THOUGHTS OF ME
    I AM PLEASED!
    THANK U SIS......
     
  6. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somehow

    I knew...:)

    thank you!

    b
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as usual from my favorite poetess
    (had 2 throw it at you again) :wink:
    (in)joyed this waterfall flow....

    me.
     
  8. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unspeakable

    what it must be to 'make' you 'anything'...


    r
     
  9. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes!!! gurl show ya stuff
    i love ya work keep me feelin
    **** good....thanks
     
  10. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm

    this is fan-effn-tastic!

    :D

    T