Black Poetry : You Make Me Shyne

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s been a long while since mere
    ………..ruminating…
    ………..meditating…
    ………. musing…of any kind—
    has caused My whole heart to smile
    But recently… when I think of You…
    the euphoric sensations produced seem
    to induce a smile so resplendent that
    it infuses my mental & emotional with
    romantic recollections of your absolute
    adorability & I am lovingly lost—
    wondering why you were sent to me
    ….& if there's a possibility that
    You & I are meant to be we
    I haven’t had the chance to thrill at the
    brush of your hand against my bare skin
    yet I know...some how...the experience
    will be one I shall never forget…
    it will leave me completely breathless
    & in anticipation of the actual event
    ……..……My heart smiles…………..
    You’ve got me feelin’ like… like…
    I shyne so beautiful & so bryght!
    You tell me that you will never get enough
    of my brilliant beams—
    this is refreshing & sweet…
    Your vibe so exquisitely unique—
    is gently seeping deeper into my being…
    making me weak & continuously causing
    …………..My heart to smile……………..

    © SunshyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    need'n ma shades

    dis hea is booti~full!!!

    and i am feelin' ya gyrl...

    I...
    ....AM

    FEELIN THIS 4REAL!!:)

    this afri sistah's havin' her own...;) all 2real

    keep shynin!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let's name her BEAUTIFUL!!! this piece is just that.

    one love,blak
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    then smile, gurlfriend

    in all your blissful anticipation of what will be...between you and he.:)

    REAL.
     
  5. saleem

    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    as delicious as you.

    s
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see...this is exactly what I be chatting about

    :) (wishing it was me--)
    the words flow--
    beautifully :)

    thank you for blessing my night with this.

    :)
    heatedlinesandpoetryspeakingofblisswhichiswonderful
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri & Baller... i'm shynin' & smilin'!! (lol) thanks for the read you guys!!

    Verb & Saleem... Beautiful & Delicious?? ya'll betta stop it!! :) ...AlwaysLove~

    Sean... i'm happy & honored to bless your nyght... ANY nyght!! witheverypoeticbreathipossess :D
     
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    Gurl,!!!!!!!!

    Look at you!!!!!!!,all in luuuv and things!!!!!!! Ha ha ha ha,YOU SHININ FOR REALZ babygurl,just know that! ...and you are very beautiful,I've never seen you but you sound very beautiful!,Keep doing yo thang sunshyne! Show em what you got! Go ahead wit yo bad self ha ha ha ha! Much peace and love,sistahfriend! This is a beautiful piece.
    Sincerely,
    yo sistah
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AND

    MAY YA HEART FOREVER SMILE
    IN THE LIGHT OF HIS PURE LOVETH FOR U
    AS YA RAYS OF GLOW BRING HIM JOY
    ( I WISH IT WAS ME! )
    IF IT WAS ME I'LL BE INSIDE U
    LIKE U R IN SELF
    MY INNER BEINGS SAY I LOVE YA GURLIE!
    FOREVER IN MY HEART U R Ahhhhhhhh!!!

    GOT MY SHADES ON AGAIN AS I FLY>>>>>>>
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICHNE$$... you Know i love you back!
    thanks for being another constant... i appreciate You!

    Stormy & Zorbshun my sister Queens!! do
    either of one of you realize how beautiful you are to
    Me!?? thanks for the beautiful words & the constant love!

    (& Zorbshun... about the book... it's a deal!!)
     
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