Quiet Poetry Lounge : You Make Me Feel....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Oct 21, 2003.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You make me feel...
    The leaves are gently falling.
    You make me feel...
    They are dancing to the ground.
    You make me feel...
    It's so windy, the leaves look like they're crawling.
    You make me feel...
    When you walk through them, they make this crackling sound.
    You make me feel like dancing in those leaves, and tossing
    them high in the air.
    You make me feel like I'm an innocent child, without a worry,
    without a care.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the beauty of fall and dancing in the crackling leaves
    just like playin in da moment of two ....nice flow i was
    all in a vision playin...wow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I first thought of this flow, I was walking down the street and saw these leaves....Glad you were in the moment, Rich.
     
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    hey. the beauty in innocence never leaves you no matter what you've been through. its a sacred thing and reading this. i just wanted to join in and play and dance with you. "without a care in the world". love your flow.
    blessings
     
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    mamma..........................













    jee...


    wow...

    beautifull
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you appreciated this Sahara Heart and LibertyLady. It's touching when the reader can feel what what the flow is saying.
     
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    oh this was nice
    like peaceful...
    like it alot
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mzblkangel, glad you could feel the peace I felt.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh *applause*
    wonderful
    wonderful
    wonderful
    very nice
    Peace
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou Bluewater, glad you enjoyed it. :)
     
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