Black Poetry : YOU (love's obsession)

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  1. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    until the end of eternity, i will love you
    just like i loved you before it began
    before i knew how to spell my name
    i already had us planned.

    i loved you before i knew you existed
    just the idea of you was enough
    that you were out there somewhere in this world
    the fantasy of you kept me from self destruct.

    i loved you at hello, how are you
    i knew no matter what came next
    you were the One I'd Give My Life To
    the One With Whom I Was Blessed.

    i loved you at goodbye.
    when i hated your selfish guts.
    i loved you More at 'baby i'm back'
    in fact i Loved you more than once.

    in the midnight hours
    stroking my skin
    every instant of exstacy
    i've ever been in
    in the good bad and ugly
    in the diamonds and the lac
    i breathed for these moments
    i'd never take them back
    when the world was against us
    when they stole you away
    this minute this hour
    last decade yesterday....

    there is no end to my love.
    no end to my loyalty.
    no matter what you do.
    i am completely
    totally
    hopelessly
    driven only by You.
    i eat
    sleep
    think
    and breathe you.
    and if you need further proof
    i'd give my apologies to GOD himself
    for if you didn't make it to heaven too
    i'd turn myself right around;
    I'd Even Go To Hell For You.
    peace.-Ms.Dy
    *copywrite6/03alw
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully said
    da love u pose is deep
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is wonderful..nice flow theDynasty1979
    Peace
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful....