Quiet Poetry Lounge : You Loved Me To Death

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You ripped my heart'
    from its entire frame...
    and watched me bleed,
    as the rip remained.


    ~you sure loved me to 'death...~

    Then you burned my soul,
    like a torch in the night...
    and I stayed there burning,
    with no sign of flight.

    ~was you slowly loving me to 'death?...~

    My mind is on edge,
    and my baby keeps crying.
    but I can't tell my child,
    that her moms slowly dying.

    ~[email protected] I wish you didn't love me to 'death...~

    You scapped my pride,
    till it was raw to the bone.
    I can't scream, can't cry,
    I'm down to a moan.

    ~you tried to love me to 'death...~

    And finally at days end,
    when I drop off to sleep..
    I dream I'm in quicksand,
    and I'm falling in deep.

    I always find myself pulling,
    back out of that sand...
    and I knew I was put there,
    by the hands of a man.

    ~I admit...you [email protected] near loved me to 'death...~

    When you practice what you preach,
    be careful of what you say,
    and because of the spirit,
    is why I'm here today.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dat's nuffin but wuv !!!! pure love
    hold on tight to da one ya with !!!
     
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    i likes this one....really likes and enjoyed the read.
    i was caught up in it deep...Peace
    Angel
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for always reaching out, we all know you're in our corner.
     
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    Glad you liked this piece, thanks for stoping by...you're a wonderful person.
     
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    mmm...mmm...mmm

    Queen...

    you write with every fiber of your being...
    and it's like lightning striking...
    in the soul...

    Love this flow... :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    queen:
    I knew your writing skills were on point but
    WOW!!!! I am so feeln' this joint.
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to poets like you and the rest, as we draw from one another.
    thanks poet.
     
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