Black Poetry : You Know Who You Are

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Aug 7, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish I could tell you what's been brewing in my mind
    You say a woman like me is truely hard to find
    But how can I trust when I've been hurt so many times?
    Yet when the time comes, it's hard to say goodbye
    Tellin you call back time and time again
    But the way I see it we can only be friends
    My husband is your cousin and you've got a girl of your own
    Yet the time between calls seems way too long
    What is it about you that's got me so stuck?
    It's far from February, but I feel like Cupid has struck
    There's so much behind the playin that I want you to know
    You got me goin crazy writing your name in the snow
    Wish I would've met you back in the day
    Cause I know **** well my life wouldn't be the same
    So what do I do, cause curiosity has got the best of me
    Can't get my mind off you, is this all we'll ever be?
    You've done more for me than you caould ever know
    Got my :heart: smilin, ask anyone it shows
    It's like a fairytale str8 out of the ghetto book
    I just can't understand how just conversation has me shook
    You better not come around here once you get out
    I might just have to show you what Alize's all about
    Thinkin in poetry now, nothing I can do
    I'm a whole new woman, all thanks to you
     
  2. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alize - blowin my mind again gyrl!

    I love: "It's like a fairytale str8 out of the ghetto book
    I just can't understand how just conversation has me shook"
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alize - blowin my mind again gyrl!

    I love: "It's like a fairytale str8 out of the ghetto book
    I just can't understand how just conversation has me shook"
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was some story..........he must really be something
    got ur heart smiling from a distance...u go girl!

    Angeli
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeeee! if i can get a woman to think dis way
    bout me surely i would wuv her str8 out da getto
    love how u mastered this piece.......
     
  6. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Alize, :wave:

    WOW!!

    This is WONDERFUL, girl!!

    I love the way you expressed this piece!!

    Keep FLOWING Poet of the Week!! :toast:

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, Stop! Think about it.

    That was a pretty nice flow.
    I loved it gurl, more than you'll ever know.
    I hope in what I write my feelin's show.
    You go gurl, flow on some mo.

    Much Luv,
    Foxy......
     
  8. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you've been bitten by the love bug big tymef!

    nice flow,
    jh
     
  10. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:THANKS EVERYONE:wave:

    j'hiah...Glad to see you on my pages again, thought you fell off the earth or somethin:)

    SwtT...I need one of those:)

    foxy...thanks for the love girl!

    Sierra...Well hello there? Where have you been? :laugh: Thanks for stopping through

    $RICH$ sometimes you just make me speechless.....

    angelic...i luv u gurl

    Randee...I'm glad you could feel me. Welcome to my brain! :)