Black Poetry : You Know It's Funny

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alana, Feb 28, 2001.

  1. Alana

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    you know it's funny
    when you think about
    power in numbers
    continuing on and on
    making me wonder

    the humor in essence
    of its underlying
    meaning leaning on
    the everlasting arms
    stars, moons, charms
    ringlets little bracelets
    hanging in harms way

    still today
    i sway down the road
    to revolution on
    fulfillment of my dreams
    to find a good solution
    lifting me up
    from all this pollution

    and if you found a
    better way
    i'd show and give my
    love today in spite
    of what you have to
    say to me

    you know it's funny
    for someone like me
    to hold the master key
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i'm not surprised that you have the key ...
    it's often given to those with hearts of gold

    flow Sis flow

    Destee
     
  3. Alana

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    Ahhhh (Thank You)

    thank u Destee

    u are so sweet

    dont ever change and i wish you
    continued success :)
     
  4. Bishop

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    I like this piece very much. :spinstar:
     
  5. Amun-Ra

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    Loved it!

    A running rhyme--I loved the effortless flow--well done and the thoughts were provoking--Amun-Ra :cool:

    Drop past today's column--lesbian lovers! :spinstar:
     
  6. Nita

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    Awe

    That was beautiful.I nned o find out what master key I hold???.I hope it's to a big Bank :lol: :laugh:
     
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    yes i agree
    this is a very nice scribe
    much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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