Quiet Poetry Lounge : you know i love you...ryght?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Jul 4, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How do I love t(He)e ?
    Allow me to amorously count the ways…

    I love you with every glance that I cast
    upon your sweet countenance

    I love you with every stroke of my hand
    on your beautiful black skin

    I love you with every beat of my heart
    & each poetic word I impart

    I love you with every breath that I take
    & each deliberate move that I make

    I love you from the deepest depths of my
    soul… & unrepressed truth be told—
    I’ve loved you from the moment that we met

    & yet…

    my love grows more intense with each second
    spent… in your charismatic company

    How do I love t(He)e…
    I want to con-tin-u-o(US)-ly count the ways…

    & I pray… that I stay…
    in love with you this way for all infinity & a day.



    © SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    COMPLETE

    I READ THIS AND GET A FEELING OF COMPLETION..I LOVE THIS CREATION.

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA

    Moving mountains... are you?

    Parting the Red Sea ... ?? Whateva ya' doin' sustah --
    I say - "handle yo biz-ness" !!

    Make it happen sista-friend One Luv!!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is very beautiful.....that's love to the 25th POWER!
    I remember love like that....I hope it doesn't only come once in a lifetime.

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MAN OH' MAN

    IF I EVER WONDERED WHAT LOVE FELT LIKE...

    YOU'VE JUST EXPOSED IT TO ME......

    Pure Love 100% free
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks You Guys!!


    G-Man. i'm honored beyond belief that You loved
    my flow. a feeling of completion, huh? that's one of the
    nicest things anyone has said to me all day! :)

    N2. as always... thanks for your response. i don't
    know about moving mountains... but i will try to keep doin
    my thang! :)

    CoCo. i'm glad you like this peace of my soul. & to
    answer your rhetorical response... if we're lucky it happens
    more than once. :)

    Mo. i'm happy i could expose you to a feeling that
    is oh-so dear to me... Love. its a many splendored thing. :)
     
  7. Bigdiggyd5

    Bigdiggyd5 Member MEMBER

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    FABULO(US)......... GET IT? ANOTHER TERRIFIC PIECE. WHEN WILL THIS TALENT BE EXPOSED TO THE WORLD? GREAT US OF IMAGERY. THE WORDS CAME FALLING OFF THE PAPER TO ME. KEEP GRACING US WITH YOUR BEST . ( ALL HAIL THE QUEEN )ARIAL ARIAL LOVER OF YOUR WORDS BIGGEST MAMA;) ;) :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SUNSHYNE

    FROM THE BRIGHTEST STAR U GLOW A FLOW
    OF LOVE LIKE NO OTHER AND THE DEPTH OF
    YA SOUL IS BONDED IN ONE LOVE
    GRACEFULLY I ADORE YA LOVE
    QUEEN >>>>>>>:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunny

    beautiful sis. absolutely beautiful
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell it like it is....

    I am lovin this...This was peotically scribe into a rhthym of love....
     
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