Black Poetry : You know how you loved me ...(inpsired by korintiers 7 Vers 15 untill 17)

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would like to bury the grieve battle i said...
    I told him about the grieve Poem "'when was i needed"'
    cause that was how i feld...
    I like to move on i said...
    I have said what i wanted to say....

    and the words were...


    You know how you loved me....
    You know what you did good....
    and what you did bad...
    God knows how you loved me....
    i was there....
    you were there..
    You know what you did...
    and you know what you did not....

    I know what i did....
    even you say i did not...
    He said ; You didnt do anything wrong,you gave me treu love and opend youre heart,
    you reached out for me he hushed....

    well guess what i did ....i said....
    i placed you above God.....
    that say,s enough...

    i loved you To much.....



    He knows how i loved him...
    He knows how he loved me...
    Lord knows how he loved me...
    Lord knows how he loved him...
    He knows how Lord loved him.....




    You know how i loved you....
    You know how you loved me....
    Lord knows how i Loved him...
    Lord knows how he loved me...



    o .....god......

    you know how i loved ....U

    i,m sorry.......

    I know how ..U loved me....
    and i know now...


    that you Saved me....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautifully done let the ink continue
     
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    i likes this it was so nice...:angel1:
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks.....Rich&mkangel






    Liberty....
     
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