Black Poetry : You Knew...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Dec 8, 2008.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You had no idea it would happen
    No possible way to know
    Well, the future often shows it's hand
    in spades, all in a row

    The truth today didn't become a lie tomorrow
    because the lie strategized it
    It was a lie all along
    You just hadn't recognized it

    The road to **** doesn't **** on you, rub it in
    Then give you it's *** to kiss it
    If Hell's Avenue gave you bells and whistles
    Then you'd take a detour and miss it

    God gave you more than 5 senses
    for a reason
    Give credence to your many senses in fair weather
    as well as during the rainy season

    When neck hairs stand up, or your gut instinct throbs,
    when your dearly departed grandma's wisdom whispers...then it's done
    Something is going to happen, time to act or react
    Now either get ready to rumble, or run Forest run!

    Come on now, you knew...
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ut oh

    ROLL CALL!

    this is a very strong message

    you talk about hairs on the back of a neck

    i felt HEAT on the back of my neck from this

    BURNING PIECE

    WOW SISTAWATZ
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz...you are hot about somethin', and I am dying to know what it is! You are definilty letting him know that you are much wiser than he.....your words are stewing nicely, and brought to a knowledgeable boil!

    page turning write...almost hope there is a part two!
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for saying that you could feel the impact So'ja, my ink was brimming to get out of that pen. Appreciated poet.
    There are so many things that we know down deep and just don't act upon. This could save us from much sorrow, if we would just pay attention. Just some strong self talk. Thank you for your response sweet apple pie.
     
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    i don't need my spidey sense tingling to know
    this was a dope write....
    and dope concept...major props poet...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this is kinda the first for me...being at a loss of words, I hear ya sis....and can truly relate to your mighty pen...it's kinda reminds me of the saying: "Tell the truth and shame the devil"
    Tight piece sis, got my full attention!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaa!!!.....ouch ! u really drop the truth from ya mental on paper
    ya pen had a deep itch to scream out realsm in life , yes so many knows but
    allow self not to act... well felt!!!
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smiling at "spidey sense". Your props are much appreciated khasm, always so nice to see you in the forum poet.
    At a loss for words queent? Wow, see I'm more used to a flowback. Thank you in seeing the truth in my words, as usual, you humble me sis.
    We can kick ourselves for not realizing, but better to apply what we know down deep next time. Thank you Brother Rich.
     
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    revisit ......still feeling you here
     
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    well if he didn't know before he knows now
    go easy on him girl
    great write i felt you on this one
     
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