Black Poetry : You HURT Me !

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STOP ! you hurt me...

    STOP ! you hurt me..

    STOP ! you hurt me...

    You hurt me momma !
    You hurt me pappa..!
    You hurt me sista...!
    You hurt me brotha...!
    You hurt me lover...!
    You hurt me Soulbrotha...!
    You hurt me Soulsista...!
    You hurt me Friend.....!
    You hurt me Sir....!
    You hurt me Madame...!


    YOU HURT ME STOP!

    Dont say i hurt myself
    i know the differents between You and Me...
    i know when it comes from ME....
    and u know when it comes from YOU..

    does the word ""HURT"" means sumthing to you..?

    do you know what words can do?

    laying and burning at the bottom of our hearts...

    tearing it appart...


    You Hurt me ...............STOP!!!
    what do you think my hearts made OF???

    Do you know what the words ""hurt "' means..

    <H> high..
    <U> urgent..
    <R >radical...
    <T> tone......



    <p> penetrating..
    <a> ache...
    <I> intens...
    <n> nuisance...

    Because the next day i get up smile again...
    great you nice hug you embrasse and yes those who know..
    me say when you do that it feels like "'real love"" gods energie that can
    flow trough us all.....

    and than they think they can not get it on..?

    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    when you hurt me ....

    IT hurts.....
    and at night i cry...
    and its the LORD that dry,s my eyes...

    do you know why i get hurt alot...?

    BECAUSE MY HEART DOESNT TURN IN TO A STONE....

    thats why they OFTEN GET IT DONE....

    Lord doesnt want me to be that (hard) way..
    Now you dont have to watch everything...
    that you say....
    And i refuse you to treat me like a saint...
    tread me like a human..
    know gods ways..
    than everything will be ok..
    When i hurt you...
    i expect for you...
    to say it to...
    Dont keep it on the down low...
    it could all turn us into...""bugga boo,s"'

    But know thy Tongue...
    know the heart...
    know the grieve...
    that you may cause....


    you hurt me...
    you hurt me...

    i,m glad i said it....


    i feel..
    relieved...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this piece drifted deep in my mind and took me on a ride
    to the place where i know this so well ......tyte scribe sistah

    don't hurt no more !
     
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    flow on...
    i felt this deep
    and can relate
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    feeling all
    the emotion
    in this scribe sis
    much love to you
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You'd have to be numb not to feel the pain in this piece.
    When pain is inflicted by anyone
    It can make you bitter and isolated
    But Letting the Lord dry your tears
    Enables you to forgive and (in time) forget

    I love this flow Liberty
    Simply Love it :luvv:


    Peace and Love-twision
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words can hurt, and they hurt even more, when the person who hurt you, acts as if it doesn't matter. I felt this flow within.
     
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    Nothing hurts more, to me, than words. Especially when you place your trust in a person and they use your weakness against you...mmmph....but, I feel ya on that one riight thurr...
     
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    I LOVE TIS SISTA LIBERTY!!!!
    KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all Beauty.s


    yes there are some peeps who get high of hurting others :(

    they go like .....""Yes she cries ....got her ..she is human..!

    I would never take someones weakness to hurt someone
    i would only show you a mirror to show you how youre weakness can hurt others...(or how it is hurting me)wich some people can consider that
    as trowing at youre feet...


    weak...

    everyone can be...
    we all sinners ..
    but we can all walk in love...
    if we want to..






    hurtdeeplady.... :(
     
  10. Akilah

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    Love your poetry,
    Thank you for sharing
    These deeply felt flows

    Much Peace,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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