Black Poetry : You hurt me bad!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A year ago, you found me...
    professed your love and vowed
    to surround me...with love and
    flowers by the hours, never
    leave me, you begged, "Please
    believe me!" "This is the new me!"
    You hurt me bad...you made me
    sad...and then mad, then sad and
    mad again.

    You wrote long emails that cried.
    Spent endless nights trying to be
    by my side. Threw away foolish
    pride, begged me to give you time.
    You blew my mind, and love was
    blind. Gave you my heart from the
    start. Never thought I would find
    you again...my first love, and my
    long lost friend.

    You hurt me bad! And now you're mad.
    You told me you were not ready for a
    relationship! What the ****...
    I closed my eyes, breath heavy sighs.
    Remind myself, that no one else
    would ever break me down again....
    You were my friend...

    You hurt me bad! Took me to a place of
    no return...Your photographs and little
    momento's I wanted to burn. But, I learned
    long ago, that one day I would wish for those
    memories, to carry me through the lonely nights.
    Was this just another one of our fights?

    You hurt me bad! It can't go on. I won't do this
    again, with you or any man...
    You hurt me bad, so very bad, that days on end
    I couldn't sleep, couldn't eat...lay curled in my bed
    in fetal position admitting defeat...the love was
    so sweet!

    You hurt me bad! If I was a man, I would have driven
    all night, to have a knuckle busting ,knock down drag
    out fight! You hurt me bad, and made me sad,and then
    mad, but guess what, you are not the only love I ever
    had...and you won't be the last!

    You hurt me bad! But I bounce back fast! I guess it
    comes from having my *** kicked so many times.
    You hurt me bad, but that's alright, after this scribe
    I know I will sleep good all night!

    BJS(C)2003
     
  2. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Boy, have I been here! Very tight mslb.
     
  3. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    me to .......sista steel ..been there...
    and mslucious......i feel you .......
    i went trough the exact same thing......It hurt so bad..
    but there is a all sees god....and there is karma
    and there is someone out there waiting for you.....
    lOve is not in one place....love is all around
    keep scribing sista....
    bless you
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep ya head up!

    You dipicted the scorned lover oh so very well
    and vividly. I'm mad at the guy and don't even
    know him. I'm glad you're movin' on. Get that
    good night's sleep. Much love!
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    MAN POET THIS WAS DEEP

    HEY THEY BLEW IT

    but don't give up POET

    DSS
     
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    be angry now, that it may run its course, and wait for he who sits high and looks low to send the one who is destined for thee...don't let this anger, dispel the notion that there is someone out there for you, for there is, he is being prepared even at this moment to take his rightful place as your God sent King...These other folks was just those who ran interference to make you lose hope, but Hope is coming, and he is looking for his bride....He will find you and in turn you will find true happiness.

    So speaketh the Bishop
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt ya sistah all the way deep within
    flow on express the anger release !
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa. Yes, if you've ever had this pain you know it when you hear of it, and you described it to a "T". I could feel the heartache in this, very emotive, real scribe.
     
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