Black Poetry : You have to pay for girls thighs...

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  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For all the guys who want ... THE GIRL... THE JOB...THE LIFE !

    but can't exactly afford it - and don't know where to begin.
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    "You have to pay for girls thighs"


    Tamia in her pajama's

    Ashanti in that skirt...

    these things cost $.


    Broke college grads need not apply to these highest of highs,
    climbing thighs
    eyes on the prize.

    These things cost $.


    Around the way girls: Tasha, Tamika, Brandy and Shantel -
    Summer morning dew still adorning their afternoon skin.
    Liquid heat clings to their thighs I peep in skirts,
    short shorts and etcetera.
    I never even approach them to say "Hi"
    because
    These things cost $.

    It's like...
    buying car insurance
    to soon buy a car
    but you need a car
    to go to work
    to make $
    just to buy the insurance.


    These things cost $.

    What shall I say when
    Nivea, Tatyana and Beyonce finally appreciate my
    charisma and wit ?

    What's next ?

    There's no $ for dating, my crib is subpar,
    and my 1990 Ford makes noises and smells funny
    but how can I afford to miss out on the beauty that is H.E.R. ?

    These things cost $.

    You have to pay for the priviledge of the company of H.E.R.
    To amaze her - To impress her - To gain the interest of her
    To take her somewhere - To take her nowhere -
    to be wherever she is.

    You have to pay for the highs of her thighs cuz her eyes
    are watching your hands reach in your pocket
    and you BETTA NOT whip out a lousy pen...

    to write a poem.










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    I just needed to get this off my chest -
    this piece like the last one
    (I heart N.Y.) come out of emergency poetry
    while i'm sittin at a comp. with other business
    to attend to... and I realize that NONE of the
    business i'm attending is what my heart desires.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'well ........let it cost $
    i be broke dis no joke
    so i guess i'll be like da rest
    sitting back watching it go by.....
     
  3. SwtT

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    Darn.I feel voilated(just kiddin)............:wave: nice poem though.

    Realize
    It ain't all about da thighs
    It's the truth behind those eyes
     
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    Though I know this ain't true
    least not for every female.
    I feel ya on the flow!
    Peace to ya, Poet!
     
  5. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for replying

    Peace to you all.

    Rich, looks like you're the only guy who feels me !


    Ladies - i wasn't sayin that all females are money hungry
    or anything.
    It's just that to be involved with a girl usually
    costs a man SOME TYPE of money.

    It doesn't have to cost ya'll anything.

    Walking in the park, playing chess - just chilling.
    All those things are free, but alot of females
    lose interest quick unless the guy does more than that.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I never said I didn't feel you...I was just stating a joke...I know where you're comin from b/c some females I know are shady like that..
     
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    Poor poets, lol... this is a morale booster!
     
  8. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Morale booster ??

    this makes me sad anytime i think of it or read it -
    and I WROTE IT -- LOL !!!!

    I don't know.... if you're a guy and you're between jobs,
    it affects your love life.

    If you're a girl - no body says a thing yo.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    right...right. i was told, recently, that i've been out of the dating game too long...coz, these days, guys give a woman money...and, if i can't get with the GAME, i'll be sitting on the sidelines.:)

    i thought that was cute...and told her that i didn't play with KIDDIES.

    ~ feeling your plight ~
     
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    EVERYTHING is on point in this one.
    dang,,

    jh.
     
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