Black Poetry : you have no idea.....

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have no idea how i feel..............

    except for the mirror that faces
    a sad appearance every morning

    You have no idea how i feel....
    except for the birds who are trying
    to chear me up when i pass by

    You have no idea how i feel...
    except for my glasses that covers up
    my swolen froggy eyes...

    You have no idea how i feel...........

    except for my toothbrush .....this morning
    it screamed at me "'what where you trying to put on me""
    "dont you know the differents between toothpaste and shampoo

    You have no idea how i feel...
    except for the childeren on the daycarecentre
    they ask me ...''ma,m why are the pancakes burned""

    You have no idea how i feel..
    except for the tv..it says "Go and sleep girl youre not even looking at me..""

    You have no idea how i feel..
    except for Tony braxton..singing
    another sad love song..

    You have no idea how i feel...
    except for the windows and walls
    i have rubbed my head severel times against them

    You have no idea how i feel...
    except for my piano
    it is begging me to play an optimistic coard...

    You have no idea how i feel..
    except for my paintings
    they ask me to come back and finish them
    as well as my songs and poems..


    i sigh......
    cause you know what hurts me the most....

    is.... that you have no idea......
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a sad poet........
     
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    Someone knows and cares!

    In each line you write, your healing, your soul you are revealing. Yes dear chile someone knows, that there is pain and hurt and a heart that is broken. And that someone sends you lots of sunshine and birds that sing and a job to go to and a house to walk through and friends here who will listen to you.
    Someone knows and cares! Besides me....
    GOD KNOWS AND HE CARES FOR HIS OWN!

    Blessings On Ya House!
    "Weeping may go on for a night, but joy cometh in the morning!" Isaiah ??? It's in the book!
    Stay strong and keep writing, just not so many post on one day! That way you get more responses...we love you!:grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww thank you msluciousb....................
    it means alot to me..........wauw ........
    i get silent here.......
    bless you....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling da emotional cry
    i stop and ask God why
    soundly he speaketh unto me

    I hear one's cries and feel da pain
    soon true love her body will gain
    da emotional mask that cover s yo head
    soon will be laid to bed
    my gentle hugs and warm embraces
    will shine a smile on ya pretty face
    no need to limb down
    stand so tall
    after all ur a Queen
    da sunshine u bring
    feel bad be not of ya soul
    ya love is like solid gold

    forth he so care
    and loveth thee in whole heart
    A new Day ahead
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    today i came here to post this poem..


    cause its how i feel now...

    and i readed the repons you gave rich after mscloub...
    i didnt saw it than...


    thank you....


    cause i need it now....
     
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