Black Poetry : You have got to give

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Dec 18, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In order to receive. I am only asking for your heart. Along with that comes all else you have and I see.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    perfect submission of the mind....
    behold the love that flows....
    in da air of love as we each ride...
    the mind is the place ta be........
    forever in da mind
    as the heart takes hold
    release of the soul and submission
    of the spirit.. to begin to love
    hmmmmmm......dont know where i am goin
    wit this but its like a open thought
    that hit.....
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear what your saying MzBlk.. I left it that way because, you can easily find yourself flowing with it.

    " Perfect submission of the mind.... "

    If your on my mind. Your in my heart

    One can not give the heart and keep the mind. They occupy the same body and soul. It's hard to flat out tell some you admire their mind. If your grounde well, you want to know who your with. So it appears to take away the focus just on physical connection. The physical, for some is secondary to the mind. I guess they need more attention. Absorption wants. Nothing wrong with that. As long as every night when the lights go down...things have you satisfied. It is real.


    Invitation to freak to heat up the walls 24 / 7.

    If this is our only foundation. we haven't built one.



    " Like don't you want all this"
    or you’re not taking it on fast and furious enough for me.
    During the day time.
    In the elevator.
    At the park.

    I want to get to know you.
    Nothing wrong with a little savoring time,
    understanding time, who you are time.
    Getting into this girl of mine.

    Loving her right can be a lot to take in.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful Hodee..so much in your saying
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was str8 on point lovin da scribe here
    brutha ya pen never fail me ....
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great things...are often found in small packages.

    this was perfect!