Black Poetry : You Had Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DigginThaShyne, Apr 10, 2001.

  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You had me long before hello
    A sweet chocolate vision of heavenly
    Uninhibitedly exhibiting your all to me
    Your whole vibe cutting into me with delicate incisions
    I quickly made it my mission, and goal
    To regain the composure that with one look, you stole
    But more importantly, I needed you to fill the hole
    The thing within me
    That upon seeing you
    I realized my heart was missing
    Dismissing all else, I was drawn by your compelling smile
    Hypnotized by your sensuality, and those sexy eyes
    Magnetically pulled to every inch of your breathtaking style
    Just one simple look
    That's all it took
    And I was contently basking in your shine
    Without a doubt, I longed to make you mine


    To be your

    soulmate, backbone

    constant, man

    Your lover, protector

    number one fan

    All of this before the 1st words were spoken,

    So to those who just don't know
    I was caught up in the rapture of you and me
    Long before that 1st sweet hello
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DTS....

    i see you found Destee's Place, huh?...

    well... WELCOME HOME POET!! :wave:

    i'm glad you came... stay a while this time...
    so people will know that's you're real!! :wink:

    now this peace... thank you! you are soooo
    sweet to me!!... & you are oh-so very talented...
    share it with everybody... let 'em see you
    shine!!... promise me?...

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling

    the love up in hea

    good piece
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yeah - that's right!!!

    DtS,

    Nice flow!!!!

    Peace
    GQ