Black Poetry : You Got Me...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MissPoetik, Dec 13, 2002.

  1. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I glanced at our shadows playfully dancing
    On the wall to the rhythm of you and I
    Black silhouettes sensually grinding in unison
    Gazing at you I caught a glimpse of myself in your eyes
    Deep-brown beautiful eyes possessing the power to capture me
    Cause I was stuck… stuck on how they seemed to be so true
    My hands gripping your muscular back
    I could see the God in you freely shining through
    Reminding me of a handsome African King
    Like Shaka: a leader, intelligent and strong
    I am proud to be your black Queen
    As you willingly love me all night long
    There is no place that I’d rather be
    And I know
    that you know
    that…
    YOU
    GOT
    ME…
    :love:
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving this vibe you put out here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow sweet vibe .....keep stroken dem keyz
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Loving It"

    Ms. P.
    this was nice loving the flow and got me too....
    Be blessed
    Queen:wave:
     
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    k0k0 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweet. love poems with that black love.

    nice flow
     
  6. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could see the God in you freely shining through

    love that right there

    i always like the saying i see God in you

    always makes me think of how i feel bout my girl
     
  7. FeLoNy

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    yeah the vibe is nice in this one...
    real nice...700