Black Poetry : You Got Me Over Here Speechless...But I Have To Say THANKYOU

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speechless

    So much love was shown to me
    When they said I was dying
    I didn’t know that anybody cared
    Until with me the feelings they shed
    To $$RICH$$ I can’t thank you enough
    For sending your prayers when it got tough
    And liquyd for your beautiful letter
    That made it able for me to sleep better
    And Kimdricka you lifted my spirits
    With your spiritual words of faithful endearments
    While Dream Weaver you live by your name
    As your letter gave me another dream to obtain
    And I can never ever forget my girl
    poeticallyspeakin’ your across the world
    But you made me laugh during conversations
    While I was at the hospital in isolation
    1poetsought the PM you sent made me happy
    Just when I had started to feel unhappy
    As you labeled the title “Mrs. Kenney”
    And reminded me that I have a new beginning
    And of course I can’t leave out the rest
    like Serenti-poet and BaduX
    Then there are the ones that made me cry
    Cindy and MORE, and SwtT you gave me life
    To stop the fear of consuming death contempt
    And I can’t forget the sweet words of PlaywititPimp
    And I can’t even try to start and describe
    the tenderness of heart given by Khasm13 and skrybe
    angelicsage you truly are an angel
    and I see your message of poetry through every angle
    libertylaida and Bluewater thank you for your concern
    you told me that crying can soothe the hurt and burn
    NADIA*BINTA you carry such beautiful emotion
    And it caught me deep in the middle of my notions
    Shawnswife you wrote a beautiful scribe
    Contained with feeling I can’t even start to describe
    And to all of you who’s name I might I have missed
    I’m sorry
    And I truly thank you for all of this
    For I’ve never felt so much heartfelt concern
    And I must go now before my smile starts to turn…
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i REALLY hope i didn't leave anybody out.....if i did...I'm REALLY sorry
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i KNEW i for got somebody!!!

    alizentang your words stop my suffering
    and they give me new meaning to deathly suffering...

    thanks girl:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    caring is da bond of loving
    forth we are family of one
    u hurt we hurt
    u cry we weep
    u bleed our hearts bleed
    this just not a site a place of cyber space
    but a place of faces of friendz a family
    at all cost i will keep us together
    see we care
    it's all love from the heart sistah
    get ya self fully well
    and enjoy life that's given

    i fly
    i fly !!!
     
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    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a very, very nice scribe
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaaawwwww girl, ur most certainly welcome. i do these things because i care and i have a lot of love for u. stay strong...
     
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    your welcome:) I gots ya back. Im jus an PM away sweetie :) :heart:
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich those words touched me sooooooo much.....thank you...you really are a great friend:)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks poetically and swtt....ya'll know ya'll r my girls:)
     
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    oops i forgot you soullyricist:)...thanks girl:)
     
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