Black Poetry : You Got Me Drunk In Your Love...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...**** boy you got me
    tongue-tied
    feelin' high
    electrified
    and at the same time
    you got me
    sleepy-eyed
    my friends think
    something's wrong with me
    my words are slurred
    no sounds emerge
    they're runnin' together
    i can't hardly speak
    can't think of anything
    i need to do
    i'm forgetting about
    everything
    except for you
    i walk around
    hypnotized
    and uncaring
    the thought of ever loosing your love is
    so overbearing
    ...****...boy how come you got me
    feelin' this way?
    i'm not walkin'
    but i'm stumblin'
    through each and every day
    i can't believe how drunk you
    got me into your love
    if i was anymore hypnotized
    all of ya'll would think i was drugged
    but then again...
    i guess i am...
    i already told you
    that i'm addicted to you
    ..****...
    now you got me drunk too...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooooweeeeeeeee!!
    he got u drunk like dat
    slow down take it slow
    relax ya running heart
    and start ova at it again.
    Tyte scribe
     
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    Drunkness?

    if he got you drunk,
    fallin head over heels.
    he must be the one you want,
    to bring home the bacon for your meals.
    i can't blame you,
    cuz love is so demanding.
    and the way you feel is,
    what i'm cleary understanding.
    with a man like that,
    you could close the whole world out.
    and fall in love with him,
    no doubt.
    the only thing i hope for you,
    is that he treats you well.
    i know that your faithful,
    because your words do tell.....
    :rolleyes:
     
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    cute poem.......i like i like....much love :)
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sarcasm...

    thanks rich...
    i'm tryin' to slow down and relax...lol :)

    lilcherry:
    yeah he's got me drunk, fallin' past head over heels
    i'm sure he's the one i want to bring home the bacon for my meals
    and yeah your right, love is demanding
    the way i feel is like i do about no other
    he's like the air i breath
    and the ground on which i walk and my spiritual cover
    with a man like him i do close the world out
    i've fallen deeply in love with him, there's no doubt
    and let me just tell you that he treats me better than well
    he's faithful and so am i and in my words that you can tell...
     
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    nice and funny too, Drunk huh?lol Loved it
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, i find it's just somethin' i wanted to play around with :)
     
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    replying back

    i'm glad that you wrote ,
    and that you took your time to talk to me.
    i'm glad that you're in love,
    i hope ya'll are 2gether for eternity.
    well anyways i'll end this flow,
    that i wrote to you.
    and hope that in return,
    the same you will do................(loved yo flow):toast:
     
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    lilcherry:
    i'm glad that you looked back to see what i had written u,
    i'm glad that i'm in love, and i hope someday that your's comes true
    i hope we are 2gether for eternity and happy.
    well anyways i gotta end this flow, cuz things are gettin' a lil distracting...

    much luv to u...

    thanks XXXPanthaXXX... :)

    and i'll keep those thoughts in mind Black_Poets....
     
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