Black Poetry : You Go To My Head

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You go to my head;
    Enveloping,
    Grasping
    Clutching and
    Cradleling....

    Candied expirations and
    pure elation when you....
    simply,
    exhale.

    Each time you breath,
    I live a little bit stronger.
    Can you blame me for loving you?
    You Go to my Head,
    and for the first time I glimpse my chance,
    at of signification in this romance.

    A liaison that leaves my head spinning,
    and i've lost control.
    recklessly loving you, and I can't seem to
    grab a hold to myself,
    though my mind says "Boy, get a hold of yourself."
    You go to my Head.

    You moved into my life and I didn't
    have a ghost of a chance.
    This time, I'm certain that this heart of mine,
    takes in your love-drug and leaves me feeling high....
    I finally view my opportunity in this romance.
    You Go to my Head.

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    "SweetKoffe Soul" Publishing
    "Poeta nascitur, non fit."
    ~The Poet is born, not made.
    PropheticNsyght
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How I love these lines:
    "Each time you breath,
    I live a little bit stronger."
    But the entire piece, was a sweet release.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you beautiful. I appreciate it!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweet!!!:toast: tight write:)
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Each and every line was worthy of :applause: @@@@@@@
    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
    I thoroughly enjoyed this poem...its one of those I wish I wrote...good job
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u created a masterpiece every line was meaningful
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Family, You all are so beautiful! Thank you all so much for your love and support!!!!!
     
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