Black Poetry : You Feel Up My Senses

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...you feel up my senses.
     
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    that was tight
     
  3. honeyluv

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    shyning through

    sunshyne he got u like that gurl!!
    i need a King like him where can i
    find one!?
     
  4. PoeticMaster

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    now i love how u flowed this one
    made me think u was talking about me!
     
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    he filled up your senses
    and you filled mine
    as i read each line

    thank you Sunshyne

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the CONSTANT love fam!!!

    SMARTGURL...
    thanks for the read &
    the stamp of tyghtness!
    Peace&Blessings~

    HONEY (4 eva my gurl!)...
    you are constantly making me
    smile!! thanks for the love &
    the read... & as soon as i
    find out where WE can find one...
    i'll let you know!! :lol:
    OneLuv~

    PM (my Nubian Kang)...
    you know i was talkin' bout
    you boy!! don't play!! ;)
    thanks for the read...
    AlwaysLove~

    DES...
    anytime you stop by it is
    a blessed event!! thanks you
    for the read & constant support!!
    LuvU4Life~
     
  7. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IT IS

    Amazingly beautiful how u spread yo shyne of love
    u just keep me in yo light of love
    ya so tasty!
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply a beautiful piece, even the second time around, dear friend. it reminds me of r. kelly's, song called: just like that. i heard it as i read this piece. keep on scribin', you know i think it's tyght, gurl.
     
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    Sunshyne...

    Gyrl...can you find me one too???? LOL There aren't any available here in Ruff-Buff!!

    Keep shynin' sis!
    Afri
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey you guysssss!!! ....

    PM (my Nubian Kang)...
    LOL... i'm "tasty"???
    just wait til you sample my
    Southern Sensuality"... ;)
    NothinButLove~

    LISTER...
    dear, sweet sistah friend!!!
    thanks for the love... miss you!
    AlwaysPeace~

    AFRI...
    ****!! sis!! now i gotta find 3...
    one for you...
    one for Honeyluv...
    & one for me... :lol:
    thanks for the love...
    Peace&Blessings~
     
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