Black Poetry : You dont know what you mean to me.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jan 20, 2005.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even if the white clouds
    and lightning stars would shape themselves
    in to letters...
    write about the love for you....
    I know as far as believe....
    that wont do....
    cause you dont know...

    And even If the flowers would sing my enthousiactic thoughts about you
    in youre ear....
    I know you wont hear...
    I know you wont hear...
    cause you just dont know...



    no...



    You dont know what you mean to me...
    aww...
    you dont know...
    You dont know what you mean to me..
    oh you dont know...
    You dont know how you move me..
    You dont know what you mean to me...


    oh..

    you dont know..




    Even if the wind would carve our names...
    in the beachsand drawed in a big heart....
    i know you would look around and say...

    ""yeah yeah ..who did that that was smart..


    And even if a dove would bring you..
    my poetry in a letter...
    You would probebly think...
    ""he got to the wrong adress ....
    because of the bad weather...

    cause you...

    just dont know...


    You dont know what you mean to me..
    oh you dont know..
    You dont know what you mean to me..
    oh you dont know...
    You dont know how you move me..
    you dont know...
    You dont know what you mean to me..

    oh you dont know...


    You dont know how i say youre name...
    trough the joy and the pain...
    You dont know how i whisper youre name..
    in my longing for youre embrace...
    You dont know how i pray...
    for him to keep you save...

    you dont know...
    oh you dont know..

    i,ve wondered if you know..



    oh ...

    you ....

    dont ..

    know.............





     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose'd whewwwww!
    the color hurt but i felt it all within
    flow on sis.....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This had such a light and airy feel to it. I had to highlight the words to read it though, because I didn't want to miss what you had to say. Flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed but tyte poetic flava
     
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    Sistah Liberty...

    I really felt the "longing for"
    in this peice... sweet & innocent

    Thank you for sharing this flow !

    Much...
    Peace & Love
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You dont know how i say youre name...
    trough the joy and the pain...


    I love this line
     
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