Black Poetry : You don't have to..........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, Jan 27, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please, just stand still
    your beauty is more than expected
    makes me wish I could
    stare at you for a living
    allday, monday through friday
    I'd never be late
    I'd put in over-time
    you don't even have to move
    just bless the Earth with your presence
    cause it's full of much hate
    and ugliness, but you are exactly what
    this Earth needs, to be the beautiful Earth of old
    let truth be told
    I know brothas see what I see
    when they set their eyes on you
    and you to even have to move
    so you stand still for me
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow..... :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done i feel dis nice drop poet
    ya scribe is tyte
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyyyyy!

    You laid it out like only a sweet hearted person could.
    You did a fantastic job of displaying adoration in your words.
    Loved it for real!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :grouphug: FROM THE SISTA'S
    WHO WANT TO JUST STAND STILL!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok
    *standin still*
    :look: :lol:
    j/k brotha
    So glad ya made yaself at home with us :)
     
  6. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kente417mojo,
    U done dropped 1 about 1 Captivating Beauty,
    Nice job of recording and conveying.

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good flow of words and imagery. I like this one.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, your words made the beauty vivid, nice drop.
     
  9. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for you poems as well as your nice comments. I get inspired by reading your words.
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a beautiful work of art, just be still so I can partake of the beauty uninterrupted.

    Tell it, brother, diggin' this 1.
     
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