Black Poetry : You don't even know me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, Jun 4, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have never met you before..
    But you have said that you've "heard about me"
    I don't know what thats supposed to mean
    I m trying to live my life dramaless ya see
    So when you mean youve heard about me..
    Fold your arms, and make that stupid a** grin
    Am I supposed to go after the subject
    That you're trying to lure me within?
    Are you trying to play mind games?
    Cuz really, sorry I haven't the time
    I am almost a grown woman
    I have other things on my mind
    I have other places to be
    Than sit in a circle with phony a** kids
    Oops, Im sorry..you say your 17?
    Well, s*** act like it then
    Don't come up to me
    With that phony smile on your face
    Im surprised your friends haven't told you
    That I'm quick to put a female in her place
    Don't ask me all these questions
    Cuz really we ain't that cool
    I have just met you
    So answering all that would make me a fool
    Oh, so you go with Jason?
    Oh, girl we grew up together
    That guy like my brother
    Us a couple? ha! try never
    ok, look...
    are you callin me a liar?
    UM no hold up there
    Don't set my mind on fire
    I don't look like much of a fighter
    Because I have these thick glasses
    But it's only cuz my visions bad...
    I have put plenty of females on their a**es
    Ok, I think that that's all the time I have
    I really must be on my way
    Wait I have one more question...
    Who are you trying to play?
    Girl, I was NOT BORN YESTERDAY!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin' your flow fo' sho'!
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say it like it is,
    tell her what's on your mind.
    bcuz life is valuable,
    and u shouldn't waste your time................(put well)
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~seventeen~ ahhhh...to be that young again. don't get caught up in the nonsense. let the river flow.:) smoothly.

    1luv
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't set my mind on fire...I see you set the pen on fire when you wrote this flow...Feelin you on this one.
     
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    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The ripe young age of 17....what these kids don't know will definatly hurt them
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now ..........well felt and heard
    flow on !
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gyrl if only more peeps were as coo as you :) work it out ma!
     
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    Shango Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Set the record straight baby girl..........and you did with this piece........keep writing & keep ur head up!!!!!!!!!
     
  10. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya girl. Snap out...Let 'em know...some folks will walk all over ya if you let them.
     
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