Black Poetry : You do to me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Feb 7, 2003.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your eyes pulled me
    across the room
    zooming in on my face
    until everything else
    was erased
    except you and me
    and I felt
    the chemistry
    sizzle through the air
    sending shock waves
    of sensuality
    down my spine~
    and all the time
    all you did was
    look at me
    but that's all it took
    because
    you had me
    from the moment
    our eyes first met~
    and realistically
    I know I shouldn't
    believe that this is
    LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT
    but my heart is telling me
    that you could be the
    LOVE OF MY LIFE
    because if this is
    what you do to me
    with your eyes~
    imagine how much
    the rest of you
    can do to me~

    (c) nfn
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another one for the Ladies!

    I say we are really tied up ...but then when have men ever submitted to women! Oh well...I think you are creating some wonderful masterpieces for your collective works...

    Blessings On Ya House! Happy Valentines Day!
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    that's what i'm talking about

    let's get 'em :lol:

    nice flow :toast:

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet another one to da ladies
    but still we got total control
    do keep on da roll
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't listen to the men we are going to tally for ourselves

    The truth of the matter is I am on a campaign the women are being politicallly shut out of this game, we are being told that we are losers, when the fact of the matter is...we have done the real Romantic poetry and they are still on that High school level when they equate sex,sex , sex with LOVE...and that's just not so.
    I love your work and I think you have outshined the majority of the men out here...well I have not been slouching either, we must support each other, challenge or no challenge...And ladies need to stick up for themselves...why is it important to me...really its the Principal of the matter.

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    tight flow........but the particpation thing is still lacking...where the rest of the ladies at...let them represent!!!!
     
  7. elayne.

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    kt.


    i'm feelin' it!! definitely... without a doubt... i'm
    feelin' your flow. sooo... umm... tell me... who is he??
    (cause you been puttin' it down, like "that" lately! :D )

    i'm always lovin' what you do, sis!!

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mslucious...thanks for your support of my work...and I'm trying to do my part...but I don't think of it as anyone submitting to anyone else...we'll just keep doin what we do and see how it pans out in the end....you've certainly done your part....

    pd..thanks as always gurl..you're so sweet...

    Rich...stop smilin so much:) ..maybe we'll sneak up just before the finish...

    Bishop..I been wonderin' the same thing...hopefully they'll show soon..thanks for the read....much appreciated..

    layne...for you to feel my flow when love is the topic is a true compliment...and who is he?..shhhhhh...memories are wonderful..and they last forever:x:

    Elmo...thanks sweetie...

    K
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    K,

    Now this is like that!!!!!

    Enjoyed the mellow love flow mos' def!!!

    Keep it up Queen!!!

    :heart:
    GQ