Black Poetry : You "Desserted" Me

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    would you be willing to receive me

    if it were easy to believe me

    when i tell you you'd relieve me

    if you'd graciously weave me

    some thoughts that'd deceive me

    into thinking you'd never bereave me

    by handing me your Granny Smith Apples

    only to leave me

    wanting more?



    love,

    howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she can't say no ! bruh........stand strong in her heart
     
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    Enjoyed the rhyme scheme, and the "desserted" theme.