Black Poetry : You Deserve

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jun 10, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    i can honestly say that you have changed my life tremendously
    but unfortunetly you haven't changed me
    your beauty shines in me like sun rays
    and your knowledge brings out the best in me
    you've done your dirt, but for the most most part you've been true to what we got
    you put in a lot work when i just wanted to play ball and run the block
    and even though i say i wanna settle down and make things right
    deep inside we both know im never gonna getout this fast life
    u know...

    you deserve the stars and the moon that lights up the night
    you deserve to be treated right
    you deserve to be on a throne and rockin jewels
    you deserve to be whine n dined
    and we both know im really not ready for that, so even tho it hurts...
    i gotta go... i just cant stay...

    every day has been a lesson
    every argument has been the seed to my respect for you
    you have brought so much to the table, when im always late for supper
    and you barely trip on me or question me, but i know you mostly wonder
    where im at or where i been
    who calls me late at night, where i really be at when im "hangin with my friends"
    u know...

    you deserve to ride with the best of them
    you deserve to smile more than you cry
    you deserve to be lifted higher than the clouds
    you deserve a better lifestyle
    and we both know, i cant give that to you, so even tho it hurts
    i gotta go... i cant stay...

    i always call you stressing you
    complainin, puttin a lot of pressure on you
    knowin that you dont need the drama, but you listen to me anyway
    im always talkin about my dreams and what i plan to be
    never have time to just let you know my thoughts and how much you mean to me
    then i get jealous when you wanna go kick it with your friends
    makin accusations and pointin fingers when im really the one doing wrong
    u know...

    you deserve to be put on a pedestal
    you deserve to have someone wait on you hand n foot
    you deserve to be completely happy
    you deserve to be free
    and we both know thats not me, so even tho it hurts
    i got to go... i cant stay...

    we both know, you deserve someone better than me...
     
  2. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 11, 2003
    Messages:
    1,360
    Likes Received:
    2
    Ratings:
    +2
    diggin' this heartfelt flow!
    Peace!
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    thank u skrybe7
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,752
    Likes Received:
    28
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Educational/Human Resources field
    Location:
    Chicago, IL
    Ratings:
    +28
    I'm like about to cry ova here cuz I really felt that....:cry: I'm so touched by that piece!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,172
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Living
    Location:
    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
    Ratings:
    +7
    dont mean to make u cry SwtT, but im glad u can feel me.
     
  6. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    174
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Computer Geek
    Ratings:
    +0
    that was nice man...tyte piece...
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    beautiful flow indeed
    tyte scribe
     
Loading...