Black Poetry : YOU CREATED IT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by L.P, Jun 30, 2004.

  1. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is hanging on by a thread
    we're on a course to eventually cut off our own head
    principles have flowed down the drain
    negative energies seem the only things that remain
    the evidence has become crystal clear
    now you can see the aggressor living in fear
    negativity standing out and that's no doubt
    consideration for others has long been abandoned
    senseless killing taking place at random
    angry in full force working overtime
    a generation waking up with a bad attitude
    and to prove it
    like flies
    they're dying
    looking at someone to hard or simply changing lanes
    you can easily catch a bullet in your brain
    mad at the world,so they spread their frustration and pain
    they don't have to know you,but they still consider you the blame
    money has more meaning than life
    it has become the front runner
    and for life it has been put on the back burner
    minds have slipped past disturbed
    materialistic mania is the only spoken word
    Society pat yourself on the back,you've started this ball rolling
    now suffer the consequence of the things that are now unfolding
    One quick note:
    The wound is open refusing to heal
    now all your orchestration is becoming real
    by neglecting the sore, it has become so infected
    amputation is not an option anymore
    able to treat what is now an infectious disease
    instead we chose to satisfy the thirst for greed
    this time you will not be able to have your cake and eat it too
    there is nowhere to hide and no matter how much you possess
    Not God's creation
    Your creation will soon put you to the ultimate test
    and you,that's hiding beneath the sheets
    your little Demons you will soon meet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up i hear ya on dis indeed one will meet
    tyte scribe
     
  3. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CHECKING OUT THE FORUM

    THANK YOU
    to night is the first time i really travel
    to a lot of ideals beautiful thoughts
    some reality checks
    it makes you want to pull a chair a have a good meal of all these words
    i would like to take this moment to deeply thank each and everyone of
    you for the warmth and kindness you have shown
    even those i write i have learned a lot some i understand some i don't
    may we all continue to live in our words
    BE SAFE
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is a sad state of affairs not to know where this world is headed, deeply written.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmm interesting compilation of thoughts my brotha :) feel free to spread love and drop your love so that we can SHARE the love :)
     
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