Black Poetry : You changed my life forever shorty

[rasheed]

Foxi,
MAAAD PROPS
Very intense, magnetic (pulling the reader in), realism
demonstrating command of the dynamics of the situation
comprehensive in coverage of the subject.....
got the reader identifying with the sistah and shorty in the write and concerned about their futures.......and well beings

Written well.........Write on......

Peace and Blessings

 

[angelicsage]

I'm with gempis...this was an amazing piece...
so full of emotion and lessons that are too
often learned by our youth...

Great Read...lil, sister...Great Read

 

[krazelyricks]

Thanks family. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my own life. That's right, this is going on in my life right now. I'm so confused that I had to put my real feelings on paper. It relieved me of some of the stress but not all of it.

 

[Beautiful_by_me]

Foxi...words can not express what I'm feeling for you...but please take my advise...above all thoughts...GURL...DO YOU!!!!!

 

[SwtT]

Do what you gotta do ma, no matter what we still you!

p.s that piece was so tight