Black Poetry : You can't ever steal my baby (an original song)

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Chorus:
    You can't ever steal my baby
    I'm his one and only lady
    So you can't ever steal him from me
    No, not my baby, no, not my baby

    Verse 1: (wife)
    See I know I don' seen you before
    And I thought I wouldn't see you no more
    It's like the more you call the more he goes
    And I just can't take it no more
    I just want it like it was before
    When he loved me and told me so
    Now he hardly ever walks through the door
    And I'm tired of seeing him go

    Chorus:
    You can't ever steal my baby
    I'm his one and only lady
    So you can't ever steal him from me
    No, not my baby, no, not my baby

    Verse 2: (Other woman)
    Well, you getting on my [email protected] nerves
    Talking down to me like I'm some girl
    Is that really suppose to hurt
    Because I still got him so you can't take it there
    He loves me and told me so
    And I refuse to just let him go
    So go on now cuz you messing up my flo'
    You may be his wife but I'm still his girl

    Chorus:
    You can't ever steal my baby
    I'm his one and only lady
    So you can't ever steal him from me
    No, not my baby, no, not my baby

    Bridge:
    (wife) He stays with me
    (other woman) But he's leaving with me
    (wife) He's a husband to me
    (other woman) But he's a man to me
    (wife) He's stay with me
    (other woman) But he's leaving with me
    (wife) He's a husband to me
    (other woman) But he's a man to me

    Chorus:
    You can't ever steal my baby
    I'm his one and only lady
    So you can't ever steal him from me
    No, not my baby, no, not my baby
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice like the wave of this poetic song
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a triangle that too many get tangled up into. Maybe this will turn into lyrics for a song, who knows poet?
     
  4. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl you better do it, Songwriter and poet (they both kind of seem to be one in the same to me) but you got it going on with this I like it.
     
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