Quiet Poetry Lounge : You Bring it out of Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, May 13, 2008.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    should i retire from writing poetry

    when i’m ready for you to flow with me?

    were you born to never “go with me”?

    would I be reborn knowing that glowingly

    you read my poetry, yet unknowingly

    thought i was the type of guy

    who'd pipe down if your "gateways" to happiness were too shy to tell my Gateway

    you care?




    love,

    howard
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maybe when the 2 of you join hands, you will continue to flow poetic lines together.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    answers yet known.....for one shell continue
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You Dare....
    Ask Such
    Could it be Much
    to REALLY give What
    The HEart Calls?

    Unrelenting
    underventing
    Overlydepending
    on your confession

    hmmmmmm:?:
     
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