Black Poetry : You bit me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Aug 15, 2005.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love will run thru my viens forever now.

    Your animal sprit is of a wolf.
    I see the Native American
    nature of your soul.

    Once bitten for ever in love.
    I have have been bitten by you.
    You tried telling me without saying a word.
    Your African American too.

    I don’t care about the nature.
    The race or the clan.
    I just want to make love to you.
    Your hot girl.
    Make me your man.

    You shake me up.
    I like that.
    Love happens.
    But never to me.
    But since I met.
    You spoke.
    Spent some time.
    The Wolf has grown inside me.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The wolf in her, just brough out the wolf in you...that couldn't otherwise be reached.
    wonderful drop poet, I like reading you
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What are you and Mrs. Hodee doing up in there? Seems like she awoke some animal magnetism in you. I enjoyed the style and vibe of this poet.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :coffee: it's this new coffee.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thas some coffee...i enjoyed this flow....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smooth sweet and fire this was tyte bruh !
    put that coffee down