Black Poetry : You Better Put Yo Hands Back To Yo Side!!!!

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You better put yo hands back to yo side
    Cause if it make contact you better go hide
    Cuz if you hit me we going on the next World War ride
    I ain't feeling you, no I ain't feeling that vibe
    Hit me, boy and I'mma hit yo pride
    Don't think a girl can punch as hard as a man? Boy somebody don lied
    Cuz I ain't no child and you ain't gon' make me cry
    Ain't no stupid broad, hit me and I'mma say goodbye
    Won't see me accepting yo apologizes saying you won't hit me again, boy you a lie
    If I make you that mad once, it's gonna be a second so don't lie
    I think you better put yo hands back to yo side

    Don't make this argument ugly
    I ain't backing down when you hit me
    Ain't like other girls around me
    Ain't **** about me ordinary
    Follow me?
    What I said was true, that girl had yo baby
    Yeah, that means you Fukked another lady
    Went behind my back now you feel the need to hit me?
    Just because I brought it to your attention, boy you better look at me
    See the look in my face, do you really think you can take me?
    I think you better put yo hand back to yo side before you temp me

    Yeah I saw you when you was with her
    Had the baby in the crib at the Picadilly with her
    Feedng "it" and smiling while you were there
    I sat on the other side of the room patiently like I didn't care
    When deep inside all I wanted to do was pull the OTHER woman's hair
    But then I thought about it, didn't you make the decision with her?
    She couldn't have stolen you if you didn't agree to take it there
    I can't believe I sat at home, how could you leave me there?
    I wanted to cry as I sat there looking at you, her, and "it", hard stare
    Trying my best to eat what was on my plate but I couldn't, I want my five dollars back for my dinner
    (*Glaring hard at my man*) There you go with that hand again, put it down before I go there

    Now how long has it been?
    Was the one hanging up on me the same one I seen?
    Did she know about me? Do you understand why I'm mean?
    It's crazy I can't believe I loved you back then
    Had me in so much love that I was a feign
    Didn't even have the nerve to leave you when you had no money, no green
    Stood by you looking through glass windows when you were in the pin
    Most girls would have left you, she wasn't with you back then!!!
    How could you put yo hand up to me man??!
    Putting yo hand up to a "Mad Black Woman" is like a death penalty man
    I ain't no punk, I ain't no wuss, you understand?
    I'll become yo late night stalker like Emenium in Stan
    Hiding in bushes, and when you least expect it the girl and yo baby will never see you again
    So I think to yo side you need to put yo hand

    Boy I don't think you want none
    You better just pack yo bags cuz I ain't the one
    Don't wanna temp me, I think you just need to be gone
    Don't even come back when you want some
    I ain't having it, boy you gets none
    Don't cry now, you picked the right one
    Maybe she can put up with yo cheating way cuz you and me are done
    You got three second before I think you better run
    One.....leave me alone
    Two.......I'm about to go for my gun
    Three......Aiight you better had gone

    I :missu: already......
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When fists get mixed into the equation, it's time to subtract yourself from that situation. And yes, I know what it is to miss a person, but what you miss was what used to be, not what is. You have a way of bringing the reader right into the mix. I was into this read poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    through betrayal and pain
    one can become strong yet soft
    missin what was .....................

    I really like how this played out
     
  4. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich and Watz, I went thur this once but it wasn't as intense as this. Of course I didn't have to warn him but once!!! We were young, I think about sixth grade, nothing big you know. But anyway, thank ya'll for feeling me.
     
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    most welcome dear sista
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Fox, ...better slow it down, you ain't in the six grade no more...
    you be a "old head" now :laugh:
    Nice piece poet, I enjoyed the flow.
     
  7. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hahahaha....I'll still give it to them. They don't know. Boys always get fooled by my innocent face. You better tell em' queen. :wink:
     
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    I liked the way you brought this out...nice flow

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    dang girl verses fine and dangerous!
     
  10. Alizentang

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    :garbage: tell em sis! :garbage:

    But jesus this was full of rage. I could feel the emotions coming off the page
     
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