Black Poetry : YOU are...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Sep 17, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are the sunrise
    That starts my day
    When the moon rise
    You lay me down to sleep
    With a smile you say

    I love you

    You are the nourishment
    I eat
    To sustain my life
    Lest I get weak
    As you say to me…

    I LOVE YOU.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed Baller indeed she is !
     
  3. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are the moonlight's ray
    hair brushing my face
    a place to stay
    a stronghold in case
    I lose my way
    angelic grace
    a brand new day

    what more can I say
    than 'all the above'

    I'm the intent, You are the Love

    :heart:
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great piece baller - the true essence of love
    With a kick arse reply from twofish
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mhmmm... i love the sweetness of this here!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    what's up playa
    these short love poems seem to be the theme up in here lately
    imma have to go out in the sun and see if I cain’t get me some too (lol)

    nice flow poet
     
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    Short and sweet.

    A peace warm enough
    to surely melt a lady's heart.

    Thanks for doin' wha'chu
    do soul well. :)

    peace
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are the green in my tea
    My morning wake up call
    The look in your eyes says
    It all
    My first
    My last
    My hearts desire
    My gift from above
    You are to me the purest
    Form of…

    I couldn’t help it you have that effect on folk
     
  9. elayne.

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    mmmhmm! i just bet i am!! :lol:

    but really tho'... i keep tellin' you that you
    have one of the sweetest pens i've ever
    had the opportunity to experience! :)
    keep on flowin' on...

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.