Black Poetry : You Are

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Apr 3, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I NEED TO BE IN THE ARMS OF SOMEONE I TRUST.
    This is so beautiful you are.
    In your arms is all I feel I want.
    I do trust just who you are.

    We both I know. In our life time have seen.
    Many troubles, some fun times so many wonderful things.

    Those we spent have spent with each other
    Unlike yet I have ever known.

    I found these blessings in this life
    When you touched me with your soul.

    Your heart beat strong.
    Your embrace so warm.
    It makes me smile when I think.
    How lucky I am.

    How blessed to be in the graces of a queen to me.

    You Are!
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling you man

    feeling the love

    show appreciation for that Queen

    and rightfully so


    peace

    :terrific:
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Now, talk like that will make a sistah melt!

    The whole piece was lovely but those lines really touched me.
     
  4. Khasm13

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    gotta let the ones u cherish know how u feel...
    every second you can....nice piece bruh...

    one love
    khasm
     
  5. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    this is lovingly touching Brother HODEE

    Eve better watch out for that real love u showin

    she like puddy in ur hands now.....

    One Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hot off da press ....sho ya love to be loved
    man this was fire
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a genuinely beautiful feel to this flow, to be safe within the arms of the one you love, how lovely.