Black Poetry : YOU ARE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $ms>GET IT, Sep 3, 2005.

  1. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    You are the one that confused me with your charm.

    You are the one that all ways came back to hold me in your arms.

    You are the one that corrupted my soul when I made you mine.

    You are the one that bought chills to my body and spine.

    You are the one that wounded my heart with your lips.

    thinking on the old days charing chips and dips.

    NOW you are not the one, My heart is dying of pain and my soul of corruption.
    The wound that you have done has never healed.I curse the day I met you,I hate to say your name,for my sickness and my worries you are the one to blame.I should have knew from exprience that you all were the same.

    The pain that you have cause will never go,
    I will be better of with Vultures that tear up my skin and pull back my eyes.

    Than to be with you and your that are full of lies.
     
  2. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a lot of pain, but the best part is we're a lot stronger than we think we are and we all get through it. Welcome to Destee and keep writing! :rolling:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    nice drop enjoyed the read....Peace Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very descriptively raw piece showing that deep pain. Many have been here, thank goodness there is a light on the other side.
     
  5. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    yeah we as people can go threw thangs which can cause pain,Thanks for your words of comfort.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    truely felt within pain we endure at time yet a shinning light we feel
     
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    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    AMEN TO DAT!
     
  8. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hopr u know it was meant for comfort in the sense that we feel you and want u to know you'te not alone
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D**N, this was raw.
    And I loved it.
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea i hate shiesty people too, and it's their loss anyway
    feeling you poet

    DSS