Black Poetry : YOU ARE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by silentsiren, Dec 7, 2003.

  1. silentsiren

    silentsiren Member MEMBER

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    YOU ARE
    You are my greatest distraction and source of happiness,
    Yet, I haven’t seen you in years.
    My feelings for you will always exists,
    And for you I will always care.

    Though you broke my heart and never mended it,
    I am not able to hate you,
    In my heart no other man will fit,
    Because no one can replace you.

    Wanting to hear you voice
    But only the silence of the telephone is heard,
    You are my choice,
    But I doubt the feeling is returned.

    I keep blaming myself,
    Thinking it’s me why we can not be.
    My feelings for you I can’t repel.
    I hope that I am your destiny.

    You are my world and my heart,
    You have yet to know this,
    Perhaps one day I’ll capture your heart,
    Then my feelings, I will show it.​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the way this was laid
    it gave me the sweet feelin
    tyte scribe
     
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    silentsiren Member MEMBER

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    Thanks


    Thanks $$RICH$$ , your words are very kind.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome continue
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed
    i laid with sweet
    charm
    flow on
    nice write here:angel1:
     
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    Thanks mzblkangel, I'm glad you liked it.
     
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    smooth drop
    from the heart
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaahhhh

    Silent no longer! You keep up this good work, it was a pleasure to read it and I hope I get to read more soon.