Black Poetry : You Are The One(Ten-Stanza Haiku)

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    you are the one i come home to
    when the world goes in at night

    you are the one i cling to
    in the middle of the night

    you are the one i shout for
    when no else is there

    you are the one that carries me
    when no one gives a care

    you are the one who lifts and
    guides me in a world so all alone

    you are the one who truly sees
    that a house is not a home

    you are the one that i depend
    on in times of right and wrong

    you are the one that i can sing
    to when we are all alone

    you are the one i write poems
    for at times when you are missed

    you are the one i often wish for
    awaiting a sweet gentle kiss


    you are this





    lana1287 copyrighted productions
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    PD

    this is the one
    the piece of love

    nice work PD
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    Pd.....

    Romantically nice flow
    keep lovin that man.....:toast:

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    thank you

    So'ja

    no limit :)

    epiphany

    keep flying

    pd
     
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    This was real sweet ma! nice to be reading you...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    love this here all the way down to ma toes. Keep it up



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeee!!!!!

    yes u r da one
    who came tyght
    and right took me
    off in da night
    ya flow is top flyght
    ya song u sing
    bring me joy
    yeah! ya da one
    romanticly
    sweetly
    gently
    is so careful
    ya da one ...............i love this one can't help myself!:D :heart:
     
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    thank you for reading me again

    much love and respect


    pd :)
     
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    Ubzo,

    and you know i feel your flow(s)


    like whoa :eek:


    much love and respect

    pd
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Richy Rich


    fo real do' :D


    much respect for your work


    pd
     
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