Black Poetry : you are the end of... (love piece)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are the end of all written xpressions when the ink of my soul was only a vision a reflection of all of you
    when only paper could feel what your heart could not

    you are the end of all imaginary slow dances
    and heaven-scent red-lit candles when i held you close
    only to wake up from a semiconscious dream of ridden romances
    walks in the park love made in the dark
    but it was just a spark from a distant fantasy

    you are the end of all bedroom thoughts as
    silk robes and sheets by the fireplace of winter
    and your body out of it's bikini by the pool
    as i strip out of my clothing and dive into
    just an ocean dry prospect, a thought, a fantasy

    you are the end of all star wishes made
    and pianos i've played singing only to your image,
    your shade atmospheric tunes of life and 4-ever
    while for you i prayed, my lover you are the end of all of my desire the beach scenarios you inspire for tonight we will light a fire..

    for you are my beginning.

    nfinite,
    j'hiah
     
  2. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do they call u brutha to the night? LOL

    LOVED IT Love LOVE!!!

    DymePlaya2gAKAdave
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    >>clapping<<

    a :toast: to you!

    This is very very very
    tyght, nice, lovely, and deep!!
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    beginning of the end......

    take my heart into your hands
    for now i feel what your heart can
    white sand beaches and far away plans prevail
    as love washes ashore....
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dymeplizzle, sup nizzle...
    :lol:

    thanx and do your sikkess flow ever!!

    N2urSoul,
    phenomenal you are.
    thanx queen
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    step from your throne
    of divinity
    into my serenity where
    only life begins
    with you and i alone,
    queen lana.

    love.
     
  7. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely...

    ...sensational. This is just, incredibly, and fascinatingly, unadulturated :love:. This piece was, definitely, felt, poet. Extremely :heart:warming. *Feelin' and lovin' this flow, deeply*...
     
  8. alyce

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    I approached this with great expectation

    and was not disappointed!

    Speak truth!

    Thank you

    A
     
  9. Afridancr

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    touched!

    Beautiful work J'hiah!
     
  10. poeticdelight

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    repost

    again :)
     
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