Black Poetry : You Are My Poetry...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Inque, Nov 27, 2005.

  1. Inque

    Inque Active Member MEMBER

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    You are my poetry
    My drum beat
    My heart

    You are my pathway
    My soulful departure
    From the leaded earth of
    stagnation, you

    Rewrite my reasoning
    Rewire my reality
    Reverse the rhythm of my rhyme
    So that it
    Flows
    With you
    Realigned

    You’re the sweet sequence
    I am so in sync with

    Restated:
    I can’t restrain it
    Or negate it
    It’s not “Roses are Red”
    Regurgitated
    It’s fate created
    And so interrelated that I’m

    Frustrated
    Eyes wide shut to the world and
    Dilated

    Translated:

    You are my poetry
     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful piece poet
    Welcome to the Poetry Pit
    Much Love
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a gorgeous piece, and I love your alliteration. Wonderfully written.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and poetry is u
    the warmth and lovin
    as it leaks to canvas
    very nice drop
     
  5. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent scribe....poetry is u, poet...keep flowing

    Peace
    Drizz
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wooo!!! man, YOU ARE MY POETRY! fa real tho... man the pen ready and hot like fire! flow like you know. ENCORE (applause) BEAUTIFUL JUST BEAUTIFUL nah whatta mean? thank you. D.S.
     
  7. spicybrown

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    Absolutely beautiful. Eye-catcher..........

    :great:
     
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