Black Poetry : You Are My Meditation (plz. help if need be)

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I lie here in the open,
    Between the earth and starry skies,
    I feel a secure feeling that leaves me breathless,
    unspoken,
    For I know our love will never die.

    As I lie here on this night,
    Clashing with a full moon,
    For we have something in common that seems so
    right,
    ...We are both whole,
    We have healed and banished the craters of our
    soul.

    As I lie here in this field,
    With the rain trickling down my face,
    I donate a single tear,
    But not one of sorrow or disgrace,
    Nor fear,
    But a drop of the happiness of feeling worry free,
    For I know you shall never leave.

    As I lie here on this morning,
    I feel the dew upon my skin,
    As it drips off of my fingers,
    I touch my lips where your kiss lingers,
    So relaxing cool and crisp,
    And then comes the wind...
    As the seeds of birth float and dance,
    Then bury themselves into the ground,
    The moving air tells me of a true romance,
    One in which I have already found,
    ...I love him..Does he know?
    If I tell him will he believe it?
    And so this kiss I'll blow,
    And hope that he'll receive it.

    As I lie here gazing,
    And staring at the sun,
    Indestructible and burning,
    Which reminds me of the fire of your eyes,
    Which evaporated the tears I once cried.

    You are my meditation,
    Healed my signs of mutilation,
    And brought back to me salvation,
    Returned my motivation,
    Life's battle I am now able to win,
    ...I found happiness in you,
    For you have given me the gentle peace to sleep
    again,
    And the powerful strength to pull through......

    I'm interrupted by a voice that's unfamiliar,
    I wake to realize I've been abducted from the
    open,
    And it says to me,
    ...Turn tape over. :geek: :toast: :geek:







    :jawdrop: ~* Be careful wut u choose 2 do in lyfe, sum1 maybe followin ur footsteps*~ :jawdrop:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweetly laid to canvass...tight drop it had me
    nice one!!!!
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tyte piece...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What an earthy, visually mesmerizing piece. I loved the way I could just see a soul lying underneath a mental tree, contemplating all of this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribing ur craft is untouched nice flow
     
  6. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnx ya'll!!!
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was just gorgeous :spin: I know how it feels to have the same person be the subject of almost every thought that enters your head, when everything that you see can in some way remind of you of that person. :love: This was sweet.
     
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    Quote-Healed my signs of mutilation,
    And brought back to me salvation,
    Returned my motivation

    Reply-Beautifully expressed poet
    Im loving your flow poet
     
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