Black Poetry : YOU ARE #1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Aug 14, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Among the things
    That smell so good.
    Coffee is up there
    In the top five goods

    Then there are flowers
    They smell so sweet
    New leather period
    Is in there to compete

    Number two is rain, :rain:
    Just after a shower
    Then there’s you girl.
    You top all the others.
     
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    Coffee, flowers, new leather, rain, and a good-smelling woman.

    Things that make ya say, "Ahhhh."

    This was short, soft and sweet, Hodee.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These things do make me say ...Ahhhh
    I bury myself deep and long into each one
    Taking in the softness, aroma of flowers,coffee and leather
    The warm heart and conversation of a good smelling woman

    We both have to stand in every rain shower together. :rain: