Black Poetry : You and me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lloyd, Jul 15, 2004.

  1. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i don't want to fight

    i am not going to scream or shout

    because this is not what it's about

    it's about care & trust

    it's about love & being there or not

    it's you & me what it's all about

    we want to end or we are going to a brand new start

    we are on the wind or we are apart

    it's gone or it's still in the heart
     
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    liking this poem
    it is saying to me
    LETS TALK ABOUT IT
    keep the flow flowing poet
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    enjoyed the flow
    the openness...
    thanks for sharing
     
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    Sometimes we get so far away from the reasons why we came together in the first place, and yu expressed this feeling so well here.
     
  5. Khasm13

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    i feel you on this scribe my brotha...
    been there...indeed
    yo, please share the love with your fellow poets
    as you have been receiving it...
    take the time to read someone else's piece
    and reply...before or after you drop your joints....
    this site is predicated on love...so give it as you recieve it...
    thanks poet...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done again your skillz bring light
    tyte scribe Lloyd
     
  7. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thx

    For everything i wanna say thank all'y'all!!!
    Khasm13,we should share what we've n i completly agree with u accordin' to the fact that we should have time for the others!
    This is a "come-back";don't worry about,i'll take time!
    Anyway,i wish to all of u a funny life,joy,happiness n above that luv.
    Lloyd :heart:
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lloyd...got me smilin.I like this piece you sayin nothin but the truth.....take it easy
     

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