Black Poetry : YOU AND I

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  1. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Can you be my muse?
    Can your smile light the gloomy darkness?
    Can you calm the storm of my raging sea, with a word from your lips?
    Can you make me laugh?
    Can you melt an icy heart with a look?
    or make my passion boil with a touch?
    Can you inspire me to greatness?
    Will you stand bravely by my side, as I battle the evil that will split us?
    Will you do these things for me and only me?
    Can you hold my heart with tender loving care?
    Can you be the star of my show?
    Let you and I become a circle of one
    Lay here patiently as I bend all to my will
    and place it humbly at your feet


    by kemetstry
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i bet she say yessssssss!!!!
     
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    i agree with Rich! flo on Kem!
     
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    The flames of your pen are still raging. So earnestly romantic.
     
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    Wonderful write... leaves a lot to the imagination... you and her:spinstar:

    :luvv:

    :picture:
     
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    torch Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great poem!!
     
  7. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thanx

    :smokin: :shades: :lips: :spin:

    Thanks for your kind words
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    great questions

    real deep
    hope they into it

    man

    peace

    my bad on the typo
     
  9. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    We should all ask these questions
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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