Black Poetry : You and I together

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by unfoolish1223, Apr 5, 2004.

  1. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thinking of you...dreaming of you...
    ever since I met you all i wanted
    to do was be with you...not only
    sexually, but mentally to...just to
    hold you would be a dream come true...
    feeling your warm body wrapped around mine...
    when I'm around you I wish I could freeze time...
    I wish our souls could interwine...I've been
    looking for love and I know you have to so just
    let me be with you...let me take you to the
    moon and stars above show you my love
    is true...you are my one and only desire...
    I admire everything about you...
    The thoughts in my mind contain
    nothing but thoughts of you...
    You are the air I breath...you
    are wat I really need...
    You are more beautiful than
    any ocean, or any sea
    not only your outside, but
    your inside to...you are the
    only thing I know is true...
    when the sky turns from gray
    to blue I look up and I see
    you...
    Now take my hand and
    follow me...let me lead you
    to the light...you and I
    are like a star that shines
    so bright...nothing in this
    world ever felt so right...
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow what a way to love a person...we all crave to be and feel love like that. When it gets as deep as the air we breath...then it's sho-nuff :luvv:
    I like your style...keep it comming...
     
  3. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks and ill surely keep it coming
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so beautifull...Poet...

    realy .....it caught my heart..


    when i do that ...

    when i have love for someone that deep .....



    Lord goes ""OH yeah ? .......who is the boss and i,m knocked out again..."'



    but this was beautifull


    Love Libertylady!...
     
  5. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea i know that feeling but thanks so much for the love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    warm embrace this was nice and felt
    we all lone to love in sweetness
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a joyous love you described, keep the flow going.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this flow
    feel so right
    wonderful
    loving this piece
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    really enjoyed the read
    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the love everybody
     
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