Black Poetry : You already know….

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You already know….
    I am gone do what I do
    Rewrite and play
    Just do my thang
    Twist and lure you along
    Dis is the new me
    Yet one in da same
    Just a little tamed

    But you already know….

    Like a cyberlistic shock
    Read as my pen walk
    And do dat talk
    Wiggle and scream
    Goin to extreme measure
    To reach dat pleasure
    Flowin slow jus
    Givin it a little mo

    Welcome to my world
    I ride deep and bold
    Unfoldin dreamz
    Turnin the right switch
    It’s like an electrical charge
    Pleasin and blazin
    Posin my hips
    Bitin my lips
    Grippin da bars
    Lash and push back
    With a twist and a blow
    Legs tighten up
    Doin a little hum

    Hammer for life

    Ridin my iron feelin free
    The sky is the limit
    I am who I am to be
    Hammer for life

    The Red (for the bloodshed)
    The Black (first all black M.C club)
    The white (we welcome all)

    You already know….

    Hammer for life
    Brothers of the Hammer Mother Chapter M.C.
     
  2. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    Wow...Well done poetess, smooth flow indeed MzBlkAngel2, for real!.................................Guess what, you already know it!:)

     
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    Well, alright!...This was a fantastic ode to your MC! :toast:

    And the confidence in this is fabulously expressed!
     
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    That was an awesome flow but I bet "you already know" that. lol. :welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If one didn't know now they do....tyte drop sis.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Welcome Homeeeeeeeeeee

    ((((((((((((((( MzBlkAngel2 ))))))))))))))))))

    Nice to read your one and only flow.

    Nice....very nice. :D

    :toast:

    :kiss:
     
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    I already knew I was just waiting for you to see it
    Woman on the rise I had the ability decree it
    The toughest steel is forged by the hammer and the flame
    The truest Angeles ruff ryde even on two wheeled frame
    So yeah it's true that I already knew
    That this black beauty would do what she had to do!

    I loved the style Dana. :toast:
     
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    Welcome back caramelpython, nice review.

     
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    Thank you for the love Brian!
    I know you knew much love and blessings to you:toast:
     
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    Thank you for showing me some love on this. I am just getting back in to writing again. Now I have to find a way to put both worlds together.
     
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