Black Poetry : you ain't God!!

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you thought it was my last breath right??
    no
    but it is my last fight girl
    forget bein' in your whirld
    i inhaled your gusty wind of drama
    so i exhaled you and your friends and your mama

    forget chasing the wind
    i have a better chance chasing your friend
    why not
    we're facing the end anyway....
    i could've had her any day but that would be chasing the air
    that would be having her in my hair
    and i don't have naps

    i'm not sprung and numb
    all young and dumb..

    i won't call you
    i won't see you
    but i admit it i may want to hit it again but even then
    i wouldn't call you
    i wouldn't see you

    you hold no key to my present or future
    when i think of the past
    i'll see you in my mind
    but even then you'll be hard to find

    in God i find restoration
    redemption
    new direction
    these are far greater than your affection

    you ain't God!!!
     
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    adefinitediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful recognition
    of who is and who ain't!
    Really diggin' this one,
    my brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now u see and knoweth .....u said a mouth full
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a little raggedy freestyle to let fellas know that we need God more than any woman :toast:
    and
    don't let the na na rule!! :D

    nothin' personal
    jh.
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes you gota let em know that the prior adoration has not skewed your veiw of the real God of creation
    nice flow poet
     
  6. poeticdelight

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    Writing You Off

    may GOD bless and keep you in his beloved sanctity

    may GOD heal all wounds and voids you may possess

    may GOD keep you from all the women who make your
    life such a mess

    Amen

    i mean it's one thing to face difficulty in a relationship
    with one female but to generalize and make such a statement
    is like saying

    you really don't have that much faith in a woman's ability
    to love

    if that's the case, then why even bother getting romantically
    involved :confused:

    peacenblessings :)
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for reading the writing on the wall shaz. :toast:

    pdelight,
    thanx for readin' me.
    this piece wasn't at all about me although the same generalprinciple applies.
    i guess i didn't get into a story detail about this one.
    well the moral of the story for both man and woman is to move on after failed relationships no matter what the cause.
    i only took a male stance. i'm surprised Joyce didn't blast me yet :D

    the statement "you ain't God" means that it's not the end of the world.
    i'm saying stop crying, regretting, wishing as if God couldn't give you things better.

    about my faith in woman's ability to love.
    sorry if i didn't come clear. i can see where i didn't.
    but i have to believe in that ability just by seeing my mother's endurance and unconditional love towards my father, knowhaimean?
    i believe in you more than any woman so what are you sayin' :maddd:
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    jh

    check your pm

    pd
     
  9. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    on point

    you can flip this script as well
    Ladies God before man !

    don't let the dang a lang rule either ! :toast:
     
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