Black Poetry : "You Again"

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlatinaPoet4u, Aug 10, 2004.

  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hadnt heard from you in awhile
    Have to admit your call made me smile

    You said you liked me and wanted to meet
    I was eager to see you and so i agreed

    When we finally met up one night
    you tried to do things that I didnt like

    My kisses and my hugs didnt seem enuff
    So you better had leave cuz the rest is my stuff

    I aint like girls you have met before
    so dont be expectin anything more

    I want your feelings as strong as mine
    But that dont mean I'll give you extra time.

    Here you are again messin with my mind
    thinkin that i am stupid and that i am blind

    Sorry to disappoint you but I aint a ***
    Go find another girl that's willin 2 blow. :spin: :deal: :spin:
     
  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    BlatinaPoet4u

    This piece is tighttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt....:D

    Keep it coming...keep it coming.

    You've got to come into voice chat and drop this piece for us.

    :thanks: for sharing.

    :toast:
     
  3. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BlatinaPoet4u, that’s the way to stand strong standing your ground
    Great! You told that rooster hound, your lovely lips won’t surround
    Nor apply the pleasure that you have reserved for your lover superb
    Sister I just loved the way you kicked that rooster hound to the curb


    BlatinaPoet4u, Seize the Day!
    Great Poem YOU have made!

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread entitled:
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You

    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
  4. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OKKKKKKKKKKKKK, TELL HIM GIRL. NICE PIECE. MUCH LOVE :spin: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:

    POETIC_DIVA
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release dis was tyte
     
  6. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnx family!!! :spin:
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello and welcome,
    can you get it any plainer than that? ...that was tight, I liked the flow.
     
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