Black Poetry : You Affect A Brotha

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  1. sraheem2

    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (for princess e)

    your words take hold
    like a running vine
    and weave their way
    up and around and in
    and out of the very sinew of
    a man's being

    your words move across
    the open page of a man's
    soul and take hold
    as the silk of your scribe
    indelibly glides like
    that very unpredictable
    and sensuous ride

    a man's heart can only
    take so much
    and your sweet expressions
    create that soulful touch
    that pierce the main vain
    while numbing the pain

    internal ruptures
    spread from the bleeding out
    leaving no way to guard
    his "needing spout"

    my dear,
    you asked and this is my
    humble attempt to tell you
    what it's been about

    your words climb me like
    padded-clawed
    feline paws up my tree
    your words drown me
    like the purest ecstasy
    your words open mental eyes
    forcing me to see

    that I was right
    about those nights
    we

    did that **** so free

    time and space
    won't let me
    escape
    this captivity

    sr2
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello poet!

    I'm diggin this one!
    Thanks for the read!
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a prisoner...

    of the sweetest kind.

    THANKS for the words, poet.
     
  4. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wwwwwoooowwwwww!!

    Princess E is a blessed woman, sraheem2! Welcome and keep it coming!

    SWT
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome!!

    welcome within da house of destee's place
    sho ya love in whispers upon da many faces
    and above u i send peace @ u welcome wit da
    blessing of dis piece.....:) :heart: :) :toast:
    :jumping: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping:
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Srheem

    Wow! This was very romantic. I loved the read. Thanks

    :wave: Welcome.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN
    :heart:
     
  7. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    this is really nice SRaheem2, thanks for sharing with us
    make yourself at home, flow, laugh, love and enjoy...
    'cause i am surely enjoying this peace :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am in awe...

    "your words climb me like
    padded-clawed
    feline paws up my tree
    your words drown me
    like the purest ecstasy
    your words open mental eyes
    forcing me to see "


    DAYUM...much love and madd respect for this one...
    Eternal
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She's Gotta be...

    Stunned! Cause you have a way with words hea bruh! Keep it comin.

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
  10. ryss77

    ryss77 Active Member MEMBER

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    hurt us!

    this one is definitely one to look out for!

    got to take this one to the slams!!!!

    do you go?

    maybe destee will start some slams for
    us to do on the east coast!

    what do you think!!

    that would be HOT!!!
     
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