Black Poetry : You’re the definition of F.I.R.E. (DSS/asimplepoet collab)

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You’re the definition of F.I.R.E.

    Da Street Soja & Asimplepoet collab
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    You're the definition of F.I.R.E cause you are so HOT,

    I believe in you and I know you my king can't be stopped.

    For you're filled with an internal flame that can't be tamed.

    Seriously your level of intelligence and drive is pure insane.

    Your knowledge of self and us as a people makes you a winner,

    To see true perfection all you have to do is look into your inner.


    You're the definition of F.I.R.E cause you are so HOT,

    You radiate brilliance in the valley and on the mountain top.

    Ambition, hope and determination burn bright in you eyes,

    So when I see you making it through it all I'm not surprised.

    You're the greatest creation on earth, I value your worth.

    Nothing compares to your mind's depth and girth


    You're the definition of F.I.R.E cause you are so HOT,

    You've been purified by F.I.R.E, and yet you still rise.

    And somehow you still maintain compassion and grace,

    Perfection is the look of determination you wear on your face.

    And that's why together we will never ever be able to fail?

    I follow you into my destiny, I stay HOT on your trail.


    You're the definition of F.I.R.E cause you are so HOT,

    You will (F) orever, (I) nspire, me 2 (R) each, (E) xcellence,

    No force on this or any other planet will ever take your place.

    For you were always meant to be the head not the tail of this race

    So my fiery king don't get weary in your well doing now

    For together we will make it through someway, somehow


    You’re the definition of F.I.R.E.

    you’re the queen

    Mother of all civilization

    you reign supreme

    apoetnotsosimple

    if you know what I mean

    I’m blessed to be on the

    Black woman’s team


    You’re the definition of F.I.R.E.

    You’re the goddess

    The Queen of Earth

    You don’t stand for the nonsense

    The strength to carry a family

    Like a single mom in the projects

    You protect your family just

    Like you promised


    You’re the definition of F.I.R.E.

    Just like a princess

    You are the reason for my existence

    You birthed me like a new born baby

    On the morning of Christmas

    Your energy is so pure

    it’s the envy of mystics


    You’re the definition of F.I.R.E.

    You are the mother

    There is no other

    9 months you are the key

    To the sister or brother

    Um I didn’t stutter

    You’re the definition of F.I.R.E.

    THERE IS NO OTHER!


    You are the
    Focus In ouR Existence


    Da Street Soja & Asimplepoet collab
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    F.......I..........R........E
    this was so deep wit depth and hot it's burnning the page
    and opening da mind of thoughts as your artistic craft is outstanding!!!

    I really enjoyed this piece of art ...wow!!!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Expressed with the power of fire, both of you put the strength of that black ink to parchment and let it burn. Fantastic job you 2!
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a beautiful and heartfelt write...very well received.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all snap a collabo wow.....i should have known reading it

    That's what i gotta do connect wit some sisters and collab
     
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    Soja & Asimplepoet

    I'm diggin this beautifully done collab....very nice.


    Epiphany:heart:
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Danggg...
    I sure hope yall had a F.I.R.E. engine on 'stand-by :lol:
    All I could do is :bowdown: to the heat :flame:from this blaze!!
    Awesome piece Poets! :welldone:
     
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    Soja & asimplepoet:
    I really enjoyed this flow of FIRE.
    Soja I am really feeln this....


    "You are the Focus In ouR Existence"

    You 2 flowed this 1 out.


    Much Luv
     
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    thanks fam for all of the love. On my end I humbled by all the compliments. looking around to see if you guys could be talking about somebody else.
     
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    WOWWWW :bowdown: :bowdown:
    I LOVE IT :terrific: :great:
    It was sincere and something I appreciate from BOTH your separate works... it was REAL
    But you both, though so different in writing style it flowed so smoothly
    It was a perfect harmony where there are definitely two voices but the end result is a clear harmonic sound :read:
    I enjoyed it and found it over too soon :)
    Bravo poets BRAVO :bowdown:
    SUPER SIZE PROPS to ya both! lol :)
     
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